Critique

During the critique, the feedback I had received was:

• Try variations of color
• Have plane moving from left to right (slowly)
• Have the door whip open for a more cartoon-ish effect
• Use of boiling for plane and clouds was effective. Try adding it to the name at the end.
• Add strong to the main character.
• Have character with more accurate proportions. Everything is too similar.
• Animation overall needs more personality.